Kia ora Navarah, I am Olivia form Yaldhurst School.Great Work on your blog post it looked really interesting. I love playing minecraft it is kind of cool I like building a lot so that is why I like playing it. I do not think it was I poem it did not really sound like one or was it a free Verse poem?. Great Work Anyway!. Bye.
Hi Navarah! My name is Hana from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Navarah! This work is amazing! I like the pictures you added onto your google drawing to show us what this game looks like. I also like the poem you made about it.
I know Minecraft! I play it with my sister sometimes. I love creating lots of houses, structures and other buildings with this game. It's really cool!
Next time, you could try to make the poem longer, and almost make a story out of it. Like, for example: Turning on my brand new laptop, and joining in playing in a pixel world... Or something like that.
Kia ora, I,m Max from yaaldhutsr model schoool. I enjoyed the part when you sai about thing that mkaes you happy. Dis you thonk aobut sayying whst you dooj muinecrafy. Next time ,y you could do a pciture of you playing the game. What do you lay mincarft on, a onputrer or ipad. HGoodbye from Masx.
Hi Navarah, My name is Renae go to Yaldhurst School a year 5. I like how you added in cool Minecraft photo. This reminded me of when we did poems in term 3. Next time you could make your own photos not just find them on the internet. 1 - 10 how much do u love minecraft and how long have you been playing for. Great post. Have fun blogging. Kind regards. -Renae
My name is Matilda and I am a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey this year! I’ve noticed that you haven’t done any of the activities yet. Our finish date is the 24th of January but there is still time to give it a go and start gaining some points!
What an amazing poem you wrote! I really enjoyed it! How did you think of such an interesting theme for your limerick?
The Summer Learning Journey has heaps of activities to choose from! Here is the link. Have a look through and find some activities you like the looks of. I’m looking forward to seeing which ones you choose! (There is an activities where you get to write a poem! I bet you'd be good at that one!)
Kia ora Navarah, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put a bunch of pictures and cool fonts and colourful backgrounds.
This reminds me of something I made a while ago thats about me, like what I like.
To improve, you could make your own pictures or write what type of poem you did.
Why did you blog about this?
Bye Navarah, keep it up!
-Amelia 🦊
Kia ora Navarah, I am Olivia form Yaldhurst School.Great Work on your blog post it looked really interesting. I love playing minecraft it is kind of cool I like building a lot so that is why I like playing it. I do not think it was I poem it did not really sound like one or was it a free Verse poem?.
ReplyDeleteGreat Work Anyway!.
Bye.
Hi Navarah! My name is Hana from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Navarah! This work is amazing! I like the pictures you added onto your google drawing to show us what this game looks like. I also like the poem you made about it.
I know Minecraft! I play it with my sister sometimes. I love creating lots of houses, structures and other buildings with this game. It's really cool!
Next time, you could try to make the poem longer, and almost make a story out of it. Like, for example: Turning on my brand new laptop, and joining in playing in a pixel world... Or something like that.
Keep up the awesome work!
From Hana
Kia ora, I,m Max from yaaldhutsr model schoool. I enjoyed the part when you sai about thing that mkaes you happy. Dis you thonk aobut sayying whst you dooj muinecrafy. Next time ,y you could do a pciture of you playing the game. What do you lay mincarft on, a onputrer or ipad. HGoodbye from Masx.
ReplyDeleteHi max its me Navarah I play Minecraft on my chrome book.
ReplyDeletehi oilvia its me Navarah it was a free verse poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Navarah, My name is Renae go to Yaldhurst School a year 5.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added in cool Minecraft photo.
This reminded me of when we did poems in term 3.
Next time you could make your own photos not just find them on the internet.
1 - 10 how much do u love minecraft and how long have you been playing for.
Great post.
Have fun blogging.
Kind regards.
-Renae
Hi there!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Matilda and I am a blog commenter for the Summer Learning Journey this year! I’ve noticed that you haven’t done any of the activities yet. Our finish date is the 24th of January but there is still time to give it a go and start gaining some points!
What an amazing poem you wrote! I really enjoyed it! How did you think of such an interesting theme for your limerick?
The Summer Learning Journey has heaps of activities to choose from! Here is the link. Have a look through and find some activities you like the looks of. I’m looking forward to seeing which ones you choose! (There is an activities where you get to write a poem! I bet you'd be good at that one!)
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Remember if you have any questions all you have to do is ask!
Can’t wait to hear from you!
Matilda :)