dear navarah .The part that stood out was the house and the fence Who biult the house ?How long long did it take to biuld the wooden fence ?where did you find the sticks you taught me about yourself how come it looks so good .
Kia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. You are good at this because you could make the words in maori. Did you think about adding backgrounds. Maybe you could you a bit more!
dear navarah .The part that stood out was the house and the fence Who biult the house ?How long long did it take to biuld the wooden fence ?where did you find the sticks you taught me about yourself how come it looks so good .
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. You are good at this because you could make the words in maori. Did you think about adding backgrounds. Maybe you could you a bit more!
ReplyDeleteRegards, Zahrah :)